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雅思作文范文-一個7分考生的分享

2013-12-13

雅思寫作7分,算是可以作為范文了。今天,小編特地找來一篇,來給大家分享分享,希望能對大家有所幫助!

在雅思考試中寫作在總成績中占有較高的地位,也正因為如此,很多考生將雅思作文作為備考的要點。對于一些考生而言想要在雅思作文中取得好的成績是一件不可能完成的事情,但是事實并不是這樣的,只要您掌握了雅思作文的寫作手法,雅思作文高分成績就是您的了。下面就是一篇雅思作文范文,感興趣的話,大家不妨試著了解一下。

雅思寫作7分范文——Topic

Some people say that older people should live with their adult children. Others say that they shouldn\'t. Which do you think is good practice.

雅思寫作7分范文——TEXT(257 Words)

One of the topics in daily life is whether or not the older people should live with their adult children. My answer is the question is that it is better for them not to.

Firstly, people of different ages have different ways of life. The old people like a quiet, peaceful and regular life whereas the young prefer noises, activities and unrestrained enjoyment. If they live together, old may feel that they are always disturbed and the young may feel that they are often handicapped.

Secondly, people of different generations have different views and values. What is quite normal to the parents may seem to be old-fashioned or wrong to the children. When they live together, they may disagree on matters ranging from minor domestic matters to national and international issues. Consequently, family life may be unpleasant or even unbearable to both the old and the young.

Last but not the least, adult children, like their parents, love independence and freedom, but their parents still take them as children and unintentionally interfere in their affairs. The situation will be worse if the adult children are already married. In this case, the children have already built a new and closed world and any outside interference may lead to conflicts.

From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that if the parents and their adult children do not live together, both the old and the young can enjoy complete independence and freedom, live a life they like, and keep intact their affections for each other.

這是一篇在文章形式內容以及結構上安排的都算是比較合理,在雅思考試中能夠寫出這樣一篇文章確實是不多見的,大家確實也有借鑒的必要。還有,一些考生可能在意識上存在誤區(qū),總是習慣性的套用范文,其實這樣并不是可取的。雖說范文寫的棒,但是并不代表大家在考試的時候也要去臨摹范文,大家完全可以根據平日里的積累,以及自身掌握的一些寫作方法去創(chuàng)作,這樣才能夠真正提高自己的寫作能力。

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