2014考研英語作文范文大學生就業(yè)

2014-01-18

思路點撥

在畫中，一位正在找工作的年輕女孩，毫不猶豫地拒絕了一份服務崗位的工作，不屑一顧地說：“伺候人的工作我不干”。這幅圖表明，很多年輕人找工作時，眼光過高，不切實際，沒有用平常心對待就業(yè)問題。實際上，可以先就業(yè)后擇業(yè)。所以這篇圖畫作文可以這樣創(chuàng)作：

第一段：描述圖畫；第二段：兩個角度分析這種現(xiàn)象的原因：志存高遠，不愿意從底層做起；好逸惡勞；第三段：建議措施：教育年輕人要腳踏實地；根除好逸惡勞的思想。

思維拓展

關于平常心態(tài)做人、腳踏實地的話題還可以有很多，例如城市選擇問題、院校報考問題、專業(yè)選擇問題、股市問題，均可以從這個角度出發(fā)，進行展開論述。請參考下圖：

高分范文

As is vividly depicted by the drawing above， the job-hunting girl refuses a service post without any hesitation， complaining that she will never take a job of serving others①。 At the same time she is wondering why finding a promising job is so difficult in modern society②。

This phenomenon can easily be found anywhere in our daily life③， especially on campus. On the one hand， many job-seekers are reluctant to take jobs that they consider to be humble and trivial， such as being a secretary or an assistant， because they have great ambitions and they only want to ride on the peak of success. What is amazing is that they are not conscious that ambition is to be achieved step by step④。 On the other hand， wanting to gain more but pay less， both the jobless and graduating students aspire to seek a job that is well-paid， relaxed and comfortable. This kind of “no work， all play” attitude toward life can be destructive to both personal and social development. We should not look down upon service industry， the third industry， because it does provide us with many employment opportunities and positions⑤。

Therefore， it is high time that we took effective measures to improve the current situation. For one thing， an education campaign should be launched to popularize the idea that “the longest journey starts with a single step” and to cultivate a down-to-earth attitude toward life. For another， the tendency of being lazy must be eradicated from the mind of the young. Only in this way can people realize their value of life better and can unemployment rate be reduced and thus can social harmony be achieved⑥。

佳作妙譯

正如上面的漫畫所示，這個找工作的女孩毫不猶豫地拒絕了一個服務崗位，她還抱怨一直找不到工作。同時她還納悶為什么在如今找個有前途的工作這么難。

這種現(xiàn)象在我們的生活中隨處可見，尤其在校園里更加明顯。一方面，很多求職者不愿意從事秘書或助理等工作，他們認為這些是卑微且無足輕重的。他們有更大的抱負，想直接登上成功的頂峰?？墒撬麄儧]有意識到理想抱負是需要一步一步實現(xiàn)的。另一方面，很多失業(yè)者和畢業(yè)生都想少勞多得，想得到一份輕松舒適而且薪水不菲的工作。這種“好逸惡勞”的生活態(tài)度對個人和社會的發(fā)展都是很不利的。我們不應看不起服務業(yè)，第三產(chǎn)業(yè)，因為它確實為我們提供了很多工作機會和職位。

因此，采取一些必要措施來改善這種情況已經(jīng)是當務之急。一方面，應該發(fā)起一場教育運動來普及這種“千里之行，始于足下”的理念和腳踏實地的生活態(tài)度。另一方面，要把懶惰的思想從青少年的思想中根除。只有這樣人們才能更好地實現(xiàn)自己的人生價值，才能讓失業(yè)率大幅下降，才能實現(xiàn)社會和諧。

名師點評

① complaining that she will never take a job of serving others：伴隨狀語。

② why finding a promising job is so difficult in modern society：這個句子充當了整個句子的賓語，叫做賓語從句。

特殊疑問詞why， what， when等引導的賓語從句必須使用正常的陳述語序，不得使用主謂倒裝的形式。

例如，這句就不能寫成：why is finding a promising job so difficult in modern society？finding a promising job是主語。is是系動詞。

再如：I don‘t know what his name is.

絕對不能寫成：I don‘t know what is his name.

③ 2008年真題閱讀選項中的句子。

原句為：Political compromises are easily found throughout the U. S. history.

稍加改動，變成了一個個性化的句子引入第二段內(nèi)容的模板，雖然沒有華麗的辭藻，但是非常精彩和純正。

④ be conscious that：意識到，that后邊必須接完整的主謂賓結構。

這個表達等同于be aware that，可以進行同意替換。