雅思寫作如何從模仿到高分？

每個考生在備考雅思寫作時都會接觸范文，范文往往也是考生們常模仿的對象，武漢小馬過河國際教育的老師表示，在備考的初期，我們模仿范文，在備考的后期，我們要做到超越范文，那么如何完成這一轉變呢？

相信資深烤鴨對于范文的了解已經鞭辟入里了，但是看著那么“簡單”的范文(詞匯和語法都不難)，為什么自己卻很難達到考官的level，下面吉林新東方的思佳老師gives you certain hints as follows：

Part 1 那些細致入微的精辟表達：

考官范文片段重現(xiàn)：

劍9T1

(1) The obvious argument in its favor is that young children pick up languages much more easily than teenagers.

(2) The greater flexibility of primary timetable allows a more frequent, shorter sessions and for a play-centered approach.

(3) Their command of the language in later life will benefit from this early exposure.

(4) They may also gain a better understanding of other cultures.

(5) Anything which encourages language learning benefits society culturally and economically, and early exposure to language learning contributes to this.

劍9T3

(1) A problem of modern societies is the declining level of health in the general population, with conflicting views on how to tackle this worrying trend.

(2) Advocates of this believe that today’s sedentary lifestyle and stressful working conditions mean that physical activity is no longer part of either out work or our leisure time.

(3) If there were easy-to-reach local sports centres, we would be more likely to make exercise a regular part of our lives, rather than just collapsing in front of a screen every evening.

(4) As well as physical activity, high tax penalties could be imposed on high-fat food products, tobacco and alcohol, as excessive consumption of any of thesecontributes to poor health.

諸如此類的表達比比皆是，無非就是“修飾修飾再修飾”，很簡單的原理“adj修飾n”“adv修飾v”。想達到考官的水平，現(xiàn)在跟老師一起練起來吧：

例1: “發(fā)展中國家”

Step1: a developing country

Step2: a country in development

Step 3: a certain country in its present development

See the effects? Another example now: “免費教育”

Step1: free education

Step2: education without any charge

Step3: particular education without any personal charge

Now what about“提高生活質量”

Step1: to enhance the quality of life

Step 2: the enhancement of living quality

Step 3: the great enhancement of individuals’ living quality

Now it’s your turn:

練習1: 滿足人們的需求

Step1:

Step2:

Step3:

練習2: 改善健康水平

Step1:

Step2:

Step3:

練習3: 減少支出

Step1:

Step2:

Step3:

Possible version here:

練習1: great satisfaction of various requirements from the public

練習2: huge enhancement of public health level

練習3: a large-degree reduction of personal cost in education

This time, make your paragraph like this:

Free education makes room for a large-degree reduction of personal cost in education and makes individuals much more knowledgeable in various aspects, which will bring them with abilities to create wealth or fortune independently.

以上就是雅思寫作從模仿到高分的轉變方法，武漢小馬過河國際教育的老師表示，大家在學習范文時，要注重領會其流暢的表達方式，而不要僅僅照搬內容。